With the greens, i usually just threw everything in at once. As listed on
http://www.totalmaleoptimaztion.com . (the greens drink) But one of my favorites is watermelon mixed with celery. This is so easy to make and one of the faster ones. It strains quicker too. (when using the nutmilk bag).
After day 2 or day 3, it should all get alot easier. I would prepare my drinks for work the day or night before. I would bring 3 drinks to work with me. (each drink is a quart, and i would use mason quart jars.) I picked some up at ace hardware.
As long as your job isnt too physical, then you should be fine. My job is fairly physical, but i didnt give a shit. Got used to it after awhile. My 2nd juice feast has been alot different than my first, where it didnt even feel like im fasting.
Im not sure about the salt and unsweetened almond milk. I just went with (and still am), pure juice and water, nothing more! I would say just go with juice and water. Nothing more
Your recipe looks pretty good to me though!